I finished writing this book a few weeks ago. And I found an editor, and she gave me over 1800+ comments on the first four chapters.

My editor gave me 1800+ comments on the first few chapters. 1600 were mostly grammar errors. I took the time over the weekend to fix them not just in the first four chapters I sent her, but in the entire book.

The past 2 days I've mainly worked on prose issues in the first chapter(about 74 notes that she left); I'm now going through the 2nd chapter(81 notes).

As I expected, it will take a long time to get the book in top shape, but I hope I can do it by the end of the year.

Obs: If you haven't seen it yet, this is the video about the characters.

Thanks for reading, and I'll see you in a future post talking more about the lore and the process I used to write the book!

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